No Questions

By veingo

Don't do things for oldtimes sake,
you can not raise the dead.
You're never going to get it back,
or change things you have said.
If the past was good then feel it quick
and let it go.
If it was bad, you'll make it worse
so leave it left alone.
Memories are building blocks
you're made of nothing more.
No matter if the're painfull,
or the ones that you adore.
You grow with every passing summer's
heat and winter's cold.
Don't think too much, don't annalize,
DO NOT FUCK WITH YOUR SOAL!

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Copyright 2005 veingo
Published on Saturday, October 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • ColorMeToxic On Friday, November 6, 2015, ColorMeToxic (240)By person wrote:

    Glad I decided to explore your poetry. Sound advice we all could almost certainly use. Scholar

  • Melancholic VIncent On Tuesday, July 24, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (430)By person wrote:

    What we are today, we are like this because of the past, good and bad. It's hard to not become obsessed by it though. We become stuck with "what if?", like looking at parallel versions of us that we cannot change and cannot touch. It's a hard thing to do my friend. But it would be a lot easier what you say.

  • A former member wrote: That is so much truth. Great Ideas from this!

  • A former member wrote: Man, I can relate.

  • Polaris On Friday, January 20, 2012, Polaris (21)By person wrote:

    So much truth. Very nice.

  • A former member wrote: Smooth write

  • A former member wrote: Very reflective and very relatable. I enjoyed it very much.

  • ColorMeToxic On Sunday, December 11, 2011, ColorMeToxic (240)By person wrote:

    Very nice. Scholar

  • urbanhumility On Sunday, December 5, 2010, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    straight across, true words, well done

  • Riven Waker On Friday, November 27, 2009, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    an awful lot of wisdom condensed into a succinct verse - awesome piece

  • A former member wrote: so true

  • Aunty Depressant On Thursday, November 1, 2007, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    *makes a tower and knocks it down leaving life a mess

  • thelostmessenger On Saturday, July 7, 2007, thelostmessenger (112)By person wrote:

    great rythm... so true. by writing this however, you did make me think... *messenger

  • A former member wrote: Good flow, man, I like that.

  • A former member wrote: I'm missin some blocks.... and I like to fuck my soal... theoretically, annally.... volumes of good advice here, chief!

  • just breath On Wednesday, March 21, 2007, just breath (39)By person wrote:

    True, very true, alot of people live in the past and don't even feel or do anything with their future! I love your work!

  • Mylissa On Saturday, November 11, 2006, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    This one makes me think! Very nice!

  • weyvern On Friday, February 24, 2006, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    damn I already commented sorry I my account expired a while back I forgoth what i had commented on *blush*

  • weyvern On Friday, February 24, 2006, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    hey good one realy good philosophy thereI like it

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, January 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Nice Veingo

  • weyvern On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    a nice peice and powerfull i like it

  • A former member wrote: Holy S*(& yes, finally a realist at DP, thank god

  • A former member wrote: Talking about 'keeping it real' -- now that is "real" -- nice write

  • Err0r On Wednesday, October 19, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    What a sharp pain to the heart when you read the cold truth.

  • A former member wrote: this is beautiful and deep i love it

  • A former member wrote: this is fucking sweet

  • A former member wrote: hmmmmm...this is an interesting piece...I know how it is to overanalyze and second guess a situation...you've described this feeling well. *Evangel*

  • elisa On Sunday, October 2, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    you may change you mind when someone drops you off the edge of the moment.....most people do

  • Blinded_Tiger On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    dont like the ending ... I trust people with themselves, they do what they gotta do for most. How many realy go through a whole life living on the edge and in the moment and all that crap?

  • Blinded_Tiger On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    some heavy stuff might need alot of thinking, and people can use all the time they want for this its there life there choice. I agree with you and then I dont, cous I just think its up to the individual if they want to fuck there skull and when

  • veingo On Saturday, October 1, 2005, veingo (532)By person wrote:

    thanks you make a good point. but this was really meant only as advice to myself for a specific situation.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Cool I do that aswell, wasnt sure if this was what it was. But if it was not personal it would still be strong enough to make me angry ^^

  • Dark Goth On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Dark Goth (43)By person wrote:

    wow this is really good advice. I could sure use some of it. good write.

  • veingo On Saturday, October 1, 2005, veingo (532)By person wrote:

    This is the first feedback I've gotten on this site. Thank you.


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