Visions of Contentment

By mysticventures



In an old chair

sits an old man

with an old cat

on his lap



One is snoring

one is purring

both are dreaming

of days gone by
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In an old chair

sits an old man

with an old cat

on his lap



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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, August 3, 2021.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • frileyma On Monday, October 10, 2005, frileyma (11)By person wrote:

    This is very original, everything I've read of yours is.

  • Doc On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, Doc (145)By person wrote:

    I agree with sIo, something is just strangely appealing, maybe the simplcity and subtle happiness of the images appeals to all of us, frankly im unsure, but I will hand onto this one.

  • sIo On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    i really like this. a lot. i can't put my finger on it, but i can embrace it more than a lot of poems on here. i truly couldn't tell you why. awesome job.

  • A former member wrote: Hmm, introspective, very nice.

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