let the devil win

By yslehc

you cry too much
you're not yourself
you pray for death
and not your health
you're so alone
you don't fit in
why not let the devil win?
if you do it
you'll be free
no pain from here
i guarantee
you'll come with me
down below
why are you saying no?
you like this pain,
you like depression?
what's wrong with you
come my direction
it won't get better
what are you saying
come on, my friend
no use delaying
take these pills
now or never
you'll go to hell
and live forever
you'll get passed this?
what are you insane?
fine, i'm leaving
here you'll remain
if you change your mind
just let me know
i'll be there
down below
have fun waiting
for life to begin
you should have just
let the devil win

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Copyright 2005 gothemite
Published on Tuesday, September 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Wolk On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, Wolk (55)By person wrote:

    Better reign in hell than serve in heaven

  • A former member wrote: Goth power! man thats a piece that resembles my battle w/Mr.Wicked-PERSEVERANCE-

  • A former member wrote: ..you mock. hah. I like the tease of this..it was almost forced down my throat..so the structure helped..don't think that was intentional, but yeah..

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