Dog Days of Summer

By elisa





just like every other
tick on the clock
.
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.
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tock
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.
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there you are
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[un]eventful

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Copyright 2005 elisa
Published on Friday, September 16, 2005.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

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  • eske On Sunday, January 30, 2011, eske (11)By person wrote:

    I like it, it feels good to me for some reason, i hope it's a good reason.

  • ubiquitoussoul On Saturday, April 17, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (346)By person wrote:

    This took a thought an nailed it in my head..the ending was so eventful..Thanks for this knock..

  • A former member wrote: cool, i like this... short and to the point...

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    hmmm... this analogy is breaking down with the gradual out-phasing of tickyclocks in favour of those reliably unreliable DigiTors which, as an added benefit, reset themselves after each blackout

  • elisa On Saturday, September 17, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    did you just filibuster me with your disaster relief agenda........consumer product names and all....?..........*grabs her scalpel to 'exercise' the demons*

  • girlafraid On Friday, September 16, 2005, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    yes, i do like this...it's very satisfying....

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, September 16, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    nice... real nice.

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