Will they ever care that I try? (Wrong)
By Adam
Will they ever care that I try?
I sit late at night thinking
Thinking about all the things I did wrong
They say this is wrong and that is how you should do it
I do it like that and I still can’t do it right
Like this they say once more, I won’t tell you again
My house mates laugh because I have to do their chores again, for “they”
voted on it
No matter how hard I try, try ,try again it will always be wrong
Will they ever care that I try?
Wrong is the story of my life
The way I lead others is wrong
Wrong is the story of my life
I always put life’s “priorities” in the wrong order
Wrong is the story of my life
Even my personality is wrong
So what do you do to a life that is going all wrong?
You change it!
Do you try more?
You know it will be useless, you’ll just get put down more
Do you give up?
Giving up seems so easy
Or do you choose the “wrong” people to talk about it?
Everyone needs to talk
Do you just hold it in till it goes away?
You will blow up at the “wrong” time. You can never just hold it in
forever
Do you try to cover it up with drugs? Take the things that are offered
to you
Most of your friends do
Or do you fault your self if some thing happens to a girl that is changing
her life in to death
I know I will make the wrong decision because I AM wrong!
Will anyone ever care that I try?
Comments on "Will they ever care that I try? (Wrong)"
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On Monday, May 29, 2006, Vexed
(74) wrote:
I care too....and there is no "wrong" in how you set your priorities 'cause they are your priorities...there is nothing truly wrong about what you do for it is your life...yet there are "wrong" people that you can talk to...little life experiences....
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On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Adam
(245) wrote:
I can see that, but well it is hard cause well it seems that the way people reply and think that well i am wrong.... though now i am getting a lot better at allowing me to be me with out them.... if that came out right...
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On Thursday, December 29, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
i care, adam...i agree w/ crista..what other ppl say isnt much, if you dont agree with them..you should believe in yourself, there are people here who love you..like crista,me and alot of others..keep up the good writin -Kel
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On Sunday, January 1, 2006, Darkest_Addiction
(44) wrote:
i guess im one of the lot of other ppl i like this write and tell the rest of the ppl to go screw them selfs cuz your a sweet guy and and as long as what yur doing makes YOU happy and your not hurting your self then it IS right
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On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Adam
(245) wrote:
Thank you kel, erin.... you two have helped me as well, thanks
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On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, AHHH
(187) wrote:
nice write. and i agree with the others.
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A former member wrote:
simple..i care. and it seems someone else does to..so, does that answer your question?
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On Monday, September 12, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
well you know I care adam, and what others say is right is not important as to what you think is right, keep at it, I believe in you....
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On Thursday, September 22, 2005, Adam
(245) wrote:
Crista, i wonder some times... but i'll talk to you about it in person
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On Monday, September 12, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
As long as you still continue to try is all that should matter.
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On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Adam
(245) wrote:
That is what some one else told me, im trying...
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On Monday, September 12, 2005, Adam
(245) wrote:
If you have suggestions on how to make this poem/mess of thoughts better please let me know this is a kinda a work in progress.
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On Monday, May 29, 2006, Vexed
(74) wrote:
I think that it was good just the way it was....
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On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Adam
(245) wrote:
Thank you ill keep it then :P