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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
By LiP Stiches
One motion…
One breath……
The bump bump bump
And the HEAT! HEAT! HEAT!!!!!!!!!!
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…………
Never gone this way
All the way
Down on the high way
FASTER
FASTER
Spin my head faster
Make the world one big huge blur
Swirling
Curling
Hope I don’t star hurling
My hair is not strait no more
My love has condensed on the floor
Sliding
Gliding
I feel life subsiding
Surreal
I feel
Love in the most concrete way!
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Copyright 2005 LiP Stiches
Published on Saturday, September 10, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..."
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On Sunday, September 11, 2005, Gideon Lost
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wrote:
This makes me dizzy to read. I like the pace of it though. Good Write. -Gideon
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On Sunday, September 11, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
i totally agree. this spun me out.
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On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
i also agree. It's crazy to read, especially because of the queer sexual under/over-tones. Good to see again.
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