He Said...

By LiP Stiches


“I never want anyone else!”
He said to me
No one else……..
No one else…….
Makes me think how lucky I am
No one else?
Is he crazy?
To want a girl like me
No one else …
No one else?????????
Runs
And swirls
With in this hollow head of mine
I feel worthy
But I don’t know why
I know he loves me
I fell his soul in me
But…
But…
But….




I realized….maybe he was made for me.

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Copyright 2005 LiP Stiches
Published on Saturday, September 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *Stifles a sob* This brought back memories...good memories, yes...but memories that are painful to recall at this moment. However...I loved this piece, and I thank you for reminding me of things forgotten. Wonderful. *Evangel*

  • DoctorAsh On Saturday, September 10, 2005, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    Very cute write pop, this makes me want to eat chips and lay around in the hallway. Very Nice.

  • Just a Rose On Saturday, September 10, 2005, Just a Rose (25)By person wrote:

    wow i really like this one, i know exactly what you mean, you cant understand why he wouldnt want anyone else until you realize "maybe he was made for me" awesome!

  • Army Barbie On Saturday, September 10, 2005, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    Awww. This is so adorable! Cause it sums up how I feel 'bout my baby. Me likes.

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