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Make me feel you
By Army Barbie
It's six a.m.
For some reason
I've got a hangover.
It feels like you.
I smell your shampoo...
On my pillow.
(Secretly, I take a moment
To smell you with a smile)
And your cologne
Has been washed over my sheets.
(Again, you have me sighing.)
You're my beautiful hangover.
The soft way you whisper
In my ear
Vibrates inside my head
107 times louder
Than you know how to talk.
And it's still a song
I would die to ear.
(Even if I know
The headache would be hell)
Your tongue is making me...
sick
Simply because
Of the left over alcohol.
But I continue to drink your kiss
Because
Tasting you makes me squirm
Beneath your demanding hands.
Waking up beside you
Is always as exciting
As going to bed wth you
The previous night.
Our last morning
Shall be more grand
Because goodbye sex
Is always better
Than everyday sex.
(You better make me feel you for the next two years.)
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Copyright 2005 A Soldiers Girl
Published on Saturday, September 10, 2005.
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On Saturday, May 12, 2007, Sin
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wrote:
this was beautiful in a soft aching way..light and sensual with a sad little smile at the end...lovely write Courtneykins ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
:] This was really good:} I enjoyed it.
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On Monday, April 23, 2007, Dark Wing
(51) wrote:
I'm with edenscancer, beautiful poem by a beautiful girl!
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On Saturday, March 10, 2007, Winter Born
(169) wrote:
I'm gonna second Lordshadow on this one.
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On Monday, November 13, 2006, edenscancer
(33) wrote:
to be loved by a woman like this, is a beautiful thing. beautiful poem. beautiful girl. lucky man.
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On Monday, December 12, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
god damn... I don't know why I never read your work before.
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On Saturday, October 22, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
*sighs* how lovely -kitty
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A former member wrote:
beautiful, so true it is just beautiful.
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
great write...have to agree with evil...."i continue to drink your kiss"....beautiful
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On Monday, September 12, 2005, MESUN
(230) wrote:
wow. i like this one, i really do. even though it's a cliche, i feel all warm and tingly inside.
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On Saturday, September 10, 2005, Just a Rose
(25) wrote:
wonderful! i absolutley love this piece.like evil said the way your brought those three together "your my beautiful hangover" great!
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On Saturday, September 10, 2005, Gideon Lost
(138) wrote:
This was a wonderful and beautiful piece. The last line was the best for me. -Gideon
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A former member wrote:
wow.. this was really good. the way you intertwined drinking, sex, and love is astounding. you've conveyed hangover love so well. nicely done.
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