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By Daughter_Of_The_Moon
Dear object of my misery,
Why? Thats all I know to say
Why do you hate me so
Why do you like to piss me off
I am this way because of you
Because you say I'm a piece of shit
because you tell me I'm an inconvenience
because I am a waste of your time
because you don't care
because you isolate me from everything
because you say I have no reason to have hope
and most of all
because you say life would be better without me
Well you are finally getting your wish
I am leaving your world
and everything that has to do with it
I will be gone forever
And you can finally have your way
You can fall asleep drunk every night
And smoke yourself to death
Just know that I had tried once upon a time
but you screwed that up to
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Copyright 2003 Daughter_Of_The_Moon
Published on Friday, March 14, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
True that. I know that I've felt the same way but don't think I could put it so clearly. I really liked your work and I hope to read more.
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On Sunday, May 1, 2005, DarkDruidess
(326)
wrote:
ouch, the anger slammed me in the face almost physically...precisely worded for a great effect.
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A former member wrote:
very deep. pure anger and feeling. hits way too close to home for comfort. very nice
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On Friday, April 18, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
Great poem.. well written. Sounds like something I'd say to a family member.... sigh.. feel the love..
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On Friday, April 18, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
I'm with ya there, it was written towards my step father as is all of my hatred
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On Saturday, April 12, 2003, diavolessa
(208) wrote:
great poem! "You can fall asleep drunk every night/And smoke yourself to death" these 2 verses were the best to my view! the poem is sad but very well writen! the message is clear! ~laterz!
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On Friday, April 18, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
thanx, i was worried about it for awhile there but i appreciate the comments:)
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A former member wrote:
depressing poem, but i like it
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A former member wrote:
great read, but falling asleep drunk is better than falling asleep alone.
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