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TIME: 09:43
By diavolessa
Your left me
Like the broken windows of a car
after a fatal crash
Eyes full of tears
TIME: 09:43
You absence fills in the atmosphere, roads that hug the bitter rain and
the fog takes a free peonage walk in my brain
I had a bad night sleep
Nothing linked me to that bed, not the warm air or your idea, or the desire
to see you in my dreams
Every time light sprains you leave me here
I would like you to go West
And I, just one night to love
I scratch my nerves and lie on you love
time sits still
On 09.43
I get up, wash my face, clean my thoughts…you are not here
Times interchange
On 09:43
the time of abssense, like a planet, like all the seas
And one…
Moment
A dream
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darkside March ‘03©
Published on Thursday, March 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "TIME: 09:43"
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, Ravenblade
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wrote:
I'm left speechless by this amzing write, it definately is getting added to my favorites....>Raven
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On Friday, May 14, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
nothing to say but...WOW...!
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On Sunday, September 21, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
I really like this piece of work...very progressive.
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Metaphoric ingenious.
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A former member wrote:
yes, yes, yes... this is truely an inspiring & hard piece...i love the street metaphors and use of words: "Like the broken windows of a car: roads that hug the bitter rain," i can feel and hear the breaking heart on cracked pavements... peonage ...
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On Thursday, March 27, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
'ain't no sunshine when she's gone and she's always gone too long every time she goes away'
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On Sunday, March 16, 2003, dark_sister
(4) wrote:
Fantastic. Very creative.
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On Friday, March 14, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Wow. Very nice.
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On Friday, March 14, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
caught right up to me the last words...'one moment...a dream'
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On Thursday, March 13, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
I really like this, very good write.
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