beam

By girlafraid

no one is coming
stay where you are
they will find you
i've been counting stars

there are so many places that i have been
(or could be, or never wanted to go)
that only he wanted to hear about
we traded maps
i started a new one
added one mark
(him)

i want so badly to hear them call for me
they'll have to first notice i'm gone

he finds me in the first place he looks
before anyone else even tries

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Copyright 2005 girlafraid
Published on Sunday, August 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Sunday, December 23, 2007, italianbella (185)By person wrote:

    incredibly beautiful:)

  • A former member wrote: so brillian

  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, September 14, 2005, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    comments enabled .... good ... this is so beautiful ... those first four lines sing ... the rest is the truth that love finds ... perfect ... funguy

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