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Mr. Green Eyes
By LiP Stiches
Deep green emeralds reflect from your eyes
Making my love to somehow override
Penetrating, your stare seems to be
Searching for a soul in and out side of we
Closer and closer you draw us together
Grasping a concept that makes us better
Knowing how imperfect we humans are
To believe you still love me make me a star.
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Copyright 2005 LiP Stiches
Published on Wednesday, August 10, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, Thorn
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wrote:
Very nice. I like how you wrote this without droning on to fill space. Well done.
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On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, Aethelwyne
(51) wrote:
short and sweet. i like it.
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