cupid wears a yellow jacket

By Six-Out

broke

broken-heart strung-stung by that arrow
no.one ever mentioned cupid having stripes. and his bow
is a dagger. dragging emotional baggage
sagging eyes and heart strings plucked for the music of our lives
striving to thrive. diving head-first into this. emotional bliss
she never had a chance to see
the sea of love- turn into a blindsiding fist
[black eyed regret] dreading another grind. another heart dismissed
a kiss set in stone
leaves another chest caved in. and tears falling alone

a.lone

a.lonelyness she feels. spills her blood into her bowl
stolen time. left to the wolves of her sullen- war.torn mind
behind the door. the curtains fall- just try not to trip, get off the stage
exit left. pull the wool over your eyes. rip
out your heart- it still beats the rythm of soul
sip.ing the bitter taste of hatred forming in the bottomless pit
the hole. drilled into the core of an angel with wings of fire
higher than the boring smalltalk. scream your desire.
on a street of broke dreams. seems like a midnight dance. transfixed
on yesterday- it's the way that the scars mend.
and at the end of this darkened tunnel. there's a meadow where orchids blend
bend in the wind. whispering this descent
it's never over.

because you'll always have me as a friend.






-
written for someone whom I consider a great friend.
she knows who she is.

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Copyright 2005 Six-Out
Published on Wednesday, August 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Alchemist On Tuesday, October 23, 2012, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    Small talk seems all there is.

  • A former member wrote: This is absolutely incredible. In reading these words I seem to be reading into myself.. and I love the feeling :) as always, your work is sheer genius

  • AniDayz On Thursday, August 11, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    beautiful. you are the cream filling.

  • elisa On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    such a beautiful way to say P.S. I Love You......especially when you both speak the same language......you always keep a hand on the heart;)

  • A former member wrote: Indeed, it has perked the inteded up. Jon, I love you... you are so dear to me. No one has ever done somethihng like this for me. I will always remember this... thank you.

  • sIo On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    this is beautiful she is quite a lucky girl, and i agree with kya :)

  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    heh, I hope this does perk the intended up, and Jon, your beautiful as always. Scholar

  • peril_notion On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, peril_notion (88)By person wrote:

    Sweet might be a little too much here, Jon... but an artist would be no far stretch. You are absolutley fantastic. ~Heather

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    aw. I'm so sweet.

  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    well ... yes you are .. i hope this helps some .. maybe this'll cast some stained glass light on the situation ... kinda makes the whole thing beautiful and grand in a way...

  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    instead of downplayed " dontworryabout-its" .. you appreciated the gravity of the weight ... and made kind of a firework out of it ... Boom ! ... youre beautiful ... nice work ... funguy


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