.masturbation.

By doll on the rag



to all you self-serving, comment-whoring fuckers.



stop it.



stop putting yourself
in my place
(we can't share it)

stop taking my memories
and labeling them yours
(your writing is illegible)

stop claiming you understand
these misarranged arrangements
(you have no empathy)

stop putting your name
on my reluctant lips
(i've never spoken to you)

stop saying you've been
everywhere my footsteps lie
(no one followed me here)



stop multiplying

stop making chains of one another
beating paths to each and every
fuck-you suicide note
and anti-social tendency
posted in rapid-fire succession

stop getting each other off
all over the place
with your bitter-torment screennames
and your blood-dripping poem titles

(oh, but it tastes so good
and everyone will notice your fangs)




go ahead
and wrap yourselves
in your precious black velvet
and crimson satin
and make small-talk with the
demons in the night,
telling your scar-noted stories
over and over again
to an audience who will fawn over you
like you want.

a really satisfying ego-fuck.



go ahead.
i don't give a shit.





but stop masturbating here
and stay away from my poems.







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Copyright 2005 doll on the rag
Published on Tuesday, July 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Hot fucking damn, this is timeless.

  • colorapathy On Saturday, April 26, 2008, colorapathy (50)By person wrote:

    well written.. biting and harsh. hurrah for enjoyable sarcasm and insults.

  • Thorn On Thursday, June 29, 2006, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    I'm gonna leave this lame statement as a comment, just to spite you. Hahahaha... But seriously, I still get a kick out of this write.

  • ONEANDLONELY On Tuesday, January 10, 2006, ONEANDLONELY (117)By person wrote:

    iF yOU wANT pEOPLE tO sTOP rEADING yOUR pOEMS, tHEN sTOP nAMING tHEM... "masturbation"

  • doll on the rag On Wednesday, January 11, 2006, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    you're really dumb.

  • Clementine On Wednesday, November 30, 2005, Clementine (121)By person wrote:

    comment removed by DP admins

  • Mistress Shadow On Saturday, October 29, 2005, Mistress Shadow (252)By person wrote:

    You make a note worthy point and you portray it in a simple yet concise form. Fricken awesome piece! (to join the masses) ~T~

  • Thorn On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    *smiles, but says nothing*

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Friday, August 5, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    LOL fuckin' A that cracks me up. Of course... by commenting I'm becoming part of all you despise... my name on your unforgiving lips (does it taste bitter?)

  • Sticky Kitty On Tuesday, July 26, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    This was fucking awesome. Great write. -kitty

  • Saint_Reaper On Thursday, July 21, 2005, Saint_Reaper (203)By person wrote:

    wow, this is a new side of the doll.... angry yet i like it...

  • A former member wrote: (I can not believe no one has done this yet) WOW! I could totaly feel this! its like you took the words right out of my head! I can relate to this totaly and completly!( sorry but if I hadn't done it some body else would have)

  • Jonas On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    what do you mean no one has done this yet? poems like this come up all the time. i think it's funny (and i am and have been guilty too, mind)

  • doll on the rag On Thursday, July 21, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    i think he means no one left a comment of the very nature i was ranting about. i'm well aware this is not an original topic, but thanks for your input.

  • Jonas On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    that we all come to a place called 'darkpoetry' and wonder that there are needy 'gothy' teen-angst types around looking for validation...

  • Jonas On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    it's like a sore in the mouth. yea, i'm usually dissapointed with the comments i get as they are just trying to get my attention... but i still get good feedback from my favorites here... and that's good enough for me.

  • Jonas On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    and that's my two cents.

  • doll on the rag On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    someone was bound to do it... at least you weren't being sincere.

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Hah. I love you.

  • doll on the rag On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    you bet you do.

  • stormtalk On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    She's mine.

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    I don't think so little man.

  • doll on the rag On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    aww... how sweet. nothing gives me the warm fuzzies like poets bickering over my affections.

  • PoeticHellion On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    Wow. You have a lot of guts. *lifts glass* Cheers.

  • A former member wrote: hmm caught me by surprise

  • doll on the rag On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    you're probably one of the people who clicked on it because of the title, and thinking maybe you'd get to read a dirty lust-poem

  • elisa On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    boo-yaa!! mock emotions are pathetic

  • A former member wrote: wow.. that was rough. i feel like you just desicrated me. for some reason. this was fucking harsh. nicely done.

  • doll on the rag On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    i'm the nicest bitch you'll ever meet. service with a smile, and all that jazz. thanks for reading. *mwah*

  • Malice In Wonderland On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    I don't believe anyone has said it better. Scholar

  • doll on the rag On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    oh, they have. this is just my little venting piece.

  • Elegant Kiss On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Elegant Kiss (182)By person wrote:

    *breathesmiles*

  • doll on the rag On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    you spoil me, amyamy.

  • Elegant Kiss On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Elegant Kiss (182)By person wrote:

    As do you, me, love.

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