child's play
By doll on the rag
cinderella, dressed in yella
________stairs to kixss her fella
_____up
went
made a M!$7@kE,
kissed a snake~
how many )=[|doctors|}-- did it take?
[::[one]::]
for every heart you shattered
so effortlessly,
my own shards mingling anonymously
in the jagged-edge pile
=##|two|##=
for the stitches
and the sutures you gave--
a souvenir
of everything gone wrong
]>~~three~~O
for the stethoscope
that listened to the hollow rushing
of septic blood as it flooded
backwards over my tonuge
[|__four__|
for the prescription bottles
that keep me company
late at night to
chase away your memory
(__]five[__)
for the residue
of you ringing in my ears,
inescapable if it weren't
for time-released safety
[::]_six_[::]~~
for the telephone
in the corner
that i'm afraid to answer
though it rarely rings
$$))__seven__>
for the therapist's pencil
scritch-scratching
across the paper in unsympathy,
recording my/your failures
""]}---eight----
for each needle
that never pierced a vein
in the same violent way
you infected my everything
[/ / / /nine/ / / />
for each pin, screw
and one night stand
i used in vain to
hold myself together
____ten____
for the flatline
and the stillness of my heart
with every breath i draw
into this chasmchest
Comments on "child's play"
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On Wednesday, February 13, 2008, Niemand
(361) wrote:
Wow, this was brilliant! *favorites* ... -Geisha
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On Tuesday, November 7, 2006, darth ren
(30) wrote:
that was really cool
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A former member wrote:
wow i love how you wrote this poem expecially with all the little pictures.
it made me want to keep reading
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On Friday, August 5, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
the graphic/colour element really topped it off... was still amazing without... but especially "the stairs" in verse1 were a great idea... it's good to see people taking pride in their work ;)
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A former member wrote:
wow! that was great
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Drea
(1443) wrote:
Wow! I'm kind of at a loss for words. Amazing.
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A former member wrote:
wow that gave me that "im guna cry" feeling in my throat. great write, i can definently feel the pain. excellent read
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood
(38) wrote:
Great write :)
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, redtearswhitesnow
(79) wrote:
Amazing
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Mischevious Princess
(28) wrote:
That was stunningly well written. I love it!
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Wow. That is absolutely, amazing. I love it.
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(182) wrote:
oh boy. damnit, doll. I'll come back to this.
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
hee... *mwah*
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
god....damn.
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
why does everyone like to swear at me over my poems? makes me so sad... =(
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
You light a fire in my pants, that's why.
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
that isn't at all my fault. you're not blaming any vd on me, sweet.