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Detached
By Thorn
You seem so distant.
Or am I the one
Drifting away?
I realize...
I don't care...
Like I used to.
Because you seem to have
Nothing more to say.
We were apart
So long...
And now together, again.
But I don't feel like I did
Before you left.
I accepted that you were gone,
But now you have returned
Leaving me trapped...
Between mindsets and emotions.
...Or lack thereof.
Your absence made me realize...
I love you;
But I don't need you.
I know I would live on
Were we to part.
But I still want us to be
In hopes that these detached feelings...
Will pass...
As all things are wont to do.
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Copyright 2005 Thorn
Published on Friday, July 15, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, February 4, 2007, Mari
(425)
wrote:
oh man this is so true .testify.
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A former member wrote:
Sounds kinda like my step dad right now, in my mom's case... "I love you;
But I don't need you." Very nice.
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On Monday, December 19, 2005, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
It's amazing... "I know I would live on Were we to part." but you almost couldn't. still, a great write. don't refine it
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On Saturday, November 26, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
everything passes, in time..and some things dont...very good...very good -Kel
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On Wednesday, October 5, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
ahhh, a feeling I know so well.. timely, pertinent. Thank you. ~b
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A former member wrote:
The situation sucks but I understand. Like usual I love it
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On Friday, July 29, 2005, LiP Stiches
(42) wrote:
my heart can relate....wooo!
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A former member wrote:
i really like this one and i can relate to it pretty well.
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A former member wrote:
oh my god...jet this is extremly good...i just wish you could tell one other person you loved them if you know what i mean...
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On Saturday, July 16, 2005, thornyrose
(23) wrote:
i am glad i came back to read this today, it is very good and easy to relate to..to have loved and lost and to be able to stand on our own. well done Thorn. and sometiems..the spur of the moment words can be the best words... :)
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On Saturday, July 16, 2005, Just a Rose
(25) wrote:
aw the point of falling out of love, do u really ever stop or u just realise you dont need them? interesting thought, good one
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On Friday, July 15, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
It may be spur of the moment, but I caught every emotion of it. I like it how its written. Wonderfully done.
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On Friday, July 15, 2005, Thorn
(283) wrote:
This one was spur-of-the-moment, too, so I haven't had time to refine it, yet.
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