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Aren't you?
By TheBardOfBlasphemy
I wonder…
Do you really know what it feels like?
I didn’t think so.
It’s because you are ignorant
And furthermore
You are blind.
I ponder…
Whether you will ever find the strength
To open up your eyes.
But I don’t think so.
It’s because you are blind
And furthermore
You don’t know what it feels like.
I am troubled by this…
Because you haven’t the faintest idea
What it really is.
It’s certainly tragic to be blind
But it is a nightmare to see life
In real life
With screaming eyes wide open.
Right now I’m wondering…
Just how you will ever decide whether to live life
Inside a nightmare or a tragedy.
I don’t think you will
Because it’s already been decided for you
And furthermore
You would have hated this either way
Because ultimately
You and I
Are me.
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Copyright 2005 The Bard of Blasphemy
Published on Wednesday, July 6, 2005.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Aren't you?"
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A former member wrote:
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A former member wrote:
Brilliance on this site is encridibly social. But my friend/neighbour/substantio. I feel the hurt.
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A former member wrote:
This is brilliant you are an amazing poet!
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On Thursday, January 19, 2006, LiP Stiches
(42)
wrote:
within our selves we do find insanity ,peace and death...it becomes us.... I LIKE IT LOTS!!!!!
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On Friday, September 23, 2005, Philla
(95) wrote:
OoO Wow. *ponders* Very conradicting in the most poetic way *smiles* This is beautiful, Bard. I look forward to more. -*Philla*-
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On Saturday, September 10, 2005, Tracer
(100) wrote:
"It’s because you are blind And furthermore You don’t know what it feels like." I am in agreeance with Innocent Acts Of Violence, meter and tempo changes, magnificant flow, excellent write, buddy
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On Friday, July 8, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Very impressive write.
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A former member wrote:
"It’s certainly tragic to be blind
But it is a nightmare to see life
In real life
With screaming eyes wide open." loved that stanza allso loved the ending
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A former member wrote:
i think you take the notion of "functionality" and run with it until it branches way beyond the socio-hemispheres the word once intended.
and the work with the wording;I like several aspects of your work, including your ability to find meter and to chan
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A former member wrote:
including your ability to find meter and to change it when wanting to shed tempos and make drum marches or slow crawls.
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