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flightless fancy
By not an addict
so sad to watch the faerie
try to dance without her wings
freedom over the horizon...
but always just out of reach.
and although i see her smile,
a truer beauty never seen,
there's a sadness in her eyes
screaming "really,
what's a faerie without wings?"
(you are missed)
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Copyright 2005 not an addict
Published on Wednesday, June 29, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
the poem was sad, the words were amazing, and it was just an amazing write.......write on.......~S
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177)
wrote:
So sad. To never be able to taste freedom again. horrible. good write.
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On Tuesday, July 22, 2008, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
A marvelous work, so deep and touch done with a grace of beauty
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On Sunday, June 22, 2008, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
Amazingly done. This one hits me deep down. Love this. *fave*
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On Friday, October 13, 2006, Jonas
(720) wrote:
quietly and deeply magical. sadly moving. your words moved in and out of rhythm and rhyme in a way i liked.
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On Tuesday, June 13, 2006, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
oh this is wonderful... so few words that really pack a punch. There are so many possibly interpretations and fitting situations this could be lent to. Love it. Magical stuff.
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On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
Brilliantly concise, painfully insightful heartcrushing piece. This is an extremely well written snapshot that truly resonates. *faves*.
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On Thursday, December 29, 2005, spaniellie
(76) wrote:
this was brilliant. i loved this poem. a fave.
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A former member wrote:
you don't have me favorited...or at least visible...my heart can't take much more.. ( of this ) you know I love you.
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On Saturday, August 13, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
just a nothingnote... lovely, you are missed indeed.
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A former member wrote:
I cannot express how many times I have basked in the beauty of this poem, and trembled with it's sadness..It is late, I am tired, and struggle to convey just how this touched me ~ Pray you forgive me. Perhaps giving it a special place on my favourites wil
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A former member wrote:
-will determine how much I appreciate this - How tremendously beautiful it is. You have captured a pure essence in so few words.."freedom over the horizon... but always just out of reach". Thank you, who ever you are..
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, not an addict
(45) wrote:
...i think i'm beyond speechless at the moment. admittedly this piece holds a very dear place in my heart, but to think i could have moved one who lives poetry as you do... thank you, truly.
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On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, Just a Rose
(25) wrote:
i really like this one, what is a faeri w/out wings? good job
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