Used to know her

By vaultgrl

I used to know her,
I swear we were best pals.
We talked of the future,
Talked of a large beautiful house.

I longed to be with her,
She was my best friend.
We were "friends forever,”
Then the rules started to blend.

The thought of it,
Seems so far away.
I’m curious,
Why are we so far apart today?

I wish sometimes,
That I could take it all back.
Take back our fantasies
Just skip that whole track.
I love her I just wish she loved me back.

I used to love her,
I swear we were best pals.
We talked of the future,
Talked of a large beautiful house.

People tell me “just let her run her course”
But I want my sister back,
I can’t let her run into this wall full force.

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Copyright 2005 vaultgrl
Published on Tuesday, June 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: beautifully written..great flow of emotions and heart-touching..wordings are great..well deserved poem of the day..i guess it should have been declared earlier..

  • A former member wrote: I been there before

  • A former member wrote: good writing

  • sixsixnine On Thursday, November 16, 2006, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    raw poem> very nice

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, November 15, 2006, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    Absolutely amazing. I enjoyed this.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Fragile but powerfull

  • up_at_five On Thursday, May 4, 2006, up_at_five (6)By person wrote:

    Beautiful Crista, Love the clarity, the emotion drips off the page Dad

  • monalisamarie On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, monalisamarie (113)By person wrote:

    Awesome work

  • A former member wrote: It is hard sometimes to put space between girl and friend...it is for me anyhow...Very touching write

  • vaultgrl On Friday, November 11, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    .....she wasn't my girfriend....she's my actual sister.....thanks though....

  • A former member wrote: you touched my soul...sisters, I really feel you on this one. Great job

  • A former member wrote: It swelled up my throat because my sister is doing the same thing...i do love this poem

  • Err0r On Thursday, September 29, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    Interesting perspective ...still a great write though.

  • A former member wrote: wow this was good i think you could have elaborated more about the wall she was running into and such but this was very nice indeed

  • A former member wrote: so sad..yet so beautiful..

  • ashottothetemple On Thursday, June 16, 2005, ashottothetemple (37)By person wrote:

    u have great proential keep at it fledgling )(SpiretT)(

  • vaultgrl On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ....thanks :)

  • Serenity On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    No need to be intimidated. There are a lot of warming people here.

  • vaultgrl On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    Thanks a bunch...kinda intimidated by you guys, you're all really good writers....

  • Serenity On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Great write hon :) And welcome to DP

  • PaperPromises On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, PaperPromises (54)By person wrote:

    I know this feeling all too well.. with a sister of my very own, good luck dear, just hang in there -Cor

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