Used to know her
By vaultgrl
I used to know her,
I swear we were best pals.
We talked of the future,
Talked of a large beautiful house.
I longed to be with her,
She was my best friend.
We were "friends forever,”
Then the rules started to blend.
The thought of it,
Seems so far away.
I’m curious,
Why are we so far apart today?
I wish sometimes,
That I could take it all back.
Take back our fantasies
Just skip that whole track.
I love her I just wish she loved me back.
I used to love her,
I swear we were best pals.
We talked of the future,
Talked of a large beautiful house.
People tell me “just let her run her course”
But I want my sister back,
I can’t let her run into this wall full force.
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Copyright 2005 vaultgrl
Published on Tuesday, June 14, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
beautifully written..great flow of emotions and heart-touching..wordings are great..well deserved poem of the day..i guess it should have been declared earlier..
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A former member wrote:
I been there before
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A former member wrote:
good writing
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On Thursday, November 16, 2006, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
raw poem> very nice
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On Wednesday, November 15, 2006, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Absolutely amazing. I enjoyed this.
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Fragile but powerfull
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, up_at_five
(6) wrote:
Beautiful Crista, Love the clarity, the emotion drips off the page Dad
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
Awesome work
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A former member wrote:
It is hard sometimes to put space between girl and friend...it is for me anyhow...Very touching write
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On Friday, November 11, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
.....she wasn't my girfriend....she's my actual sister.....thanks though....
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A former member wrote:
you touched my soul...sisters, I really feel you on this one. Great job
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A former member wrote:
It swelled up my throat because my sister is doing the same thing...i do love this poem
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On Thursday, September 29, 2005, Err0r
(365) wrote:
Interesting perspective ...still a great write though.
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A former member wrote:
wow this was good i think you could have elaborated more about the wall she was running into and such but this was very nice indeed
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A former member wrote:
so sad..yet so beautiful..
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On Thursday, June 16, 2005, ashottothetemple
(37) wrote:
u have great proential keep at it fledgling )(SpiretT)(
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On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
....thanks :)
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On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
No need to be intimidated. There are a lot of warming people here.
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On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
Thanks a bunch...kinda intimidated by you guys, you're all really good writers....
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On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Great write hon :) And welcome to DP
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On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, PaperPromises
(54) wrote:
I know this feeling all too well.. with a sister of my very own, good luck dear, just hang in there -Cor