Cinema Chivalry

By elisa

a girl
a guy
a puddle
...no coat.

just another
black & white
curbside tragedy

lost serendipity

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Copyright 2005 elisa
Published on Wednesday, June 8, 2005.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, February 23, 2011, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    where has all the chivalry gone anyway? amusing... thanks

  • Railway_Butterfly On Tuesday, February 22, 2011, Railway_Butterfly (354)By person wrote:

    I like this a lot.. but i'm also a big sucker for it too. I'm certainly not naieve but perhaps blindly optimistic that there can be some truth in it all..

  • carlosjackal On Friday, August 13, 2010, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    Bang Bang Bang

  • A former member wrote: hey you did good!

  • Serenity On Saturday, June 11, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    I think there could be a lot I could say to this peice considering it's truth and the length of it. But then it'd be pointless because words really can't ... say much to this. So I'll just agree with Sio.

  • A former member wrote: simply truth

  • sIo On Thursday, June 9, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    wow....thats the only word i could think of :)

  • Railway_Butterfly On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (354)By person wrote:

    Ok, i'll be honest. I have nothing to say here that.. either hasn't already been said or will just sound.. blahish if I say it. But i've read this quite a few times over today and yesterday.. and I want you to know that I love it.

  • elisa On Thursday, June 9, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    it's nice to know i'm not the only one that has some unexplainable feelings about those freeze frame moments...thx:)

  • Solace On Wednesday, June 8, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    I shall carry a coat with me everywhere then perhaps, to fall in love from a show of chivalry, how romantic and yet...and yet...

  • elisa On Thursday, June 9, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    o'yay....nothing sweeps me off my feet like a bijou moment of minimal effort;)

  • Solace On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Isn't minimalism the new romanticism? Or am I just missing the point of vogue interdictions into traditionalism?

  • elisa On Thursday, June 9, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    to be perfectly honest...i know zilch about romanticism or traditionalism...i would never accept a proposal during halftime at a basketball game nor would i run hand in hand on a beach in slow motion with tacky tear dripping music in the background..

  • elisa On Thursday, June 9, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ....i guess deep down i sorta dispise the girls that fall for those 'pre-packaged' romances they read about in Cosmo or watch in a sappy pms kinda feminine movie of the week.... :)

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, June 8, 2005, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    you're so damned outstanding and this is perfect

  • Soulfire On Wednesday, June 8, 2005, Soulfire (97)By person wrote:

    short and sweet..but it conveys so much! Love it.

  • Mr King On Wednesday, June 8, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    that was on point.. like a razor... sharp... Love, Seth

  • elisa On Wednesday, June 8, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    those moments play out in slow motion and become grainy with distance~elisa

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