Shameless...

By A Velvet Tongue

Shameless
synthetic diversion of sin
burrowing under my flesh
like a lascivious leprosy
salacious
...stewed
....sinister

Formidable
arousing this festering need
hidden deep within tommorrow
with amicable dismay
tumultuous
...taxing
......toilsome

Puritan
a single thornless rose
daintily delivered from death
sunkissed and serene
un-equaled
...unmarred
........utopian

Heady
Impetuous boot of despair
mudded, soiled and pissed
crushing life within a mere step
impassioned
...impulsive
.......irrational

Barren
I wait for you
hungry and hollow within
athirst with carnal hydration
rapacious
.....ravenous
.......ready

Shameless
i ache for you
still drunk in your yen
a hand on my breast
paltry
...petty
.......pale...


Ghostly
a clairvoyant's whim
only you know the moments
your thoughts lead to me
scandalous
..sinful
.....Shamless...

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Copyright 2005 A Velvet Tongue
Published on Saturday, May 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • manywalks On Tuesday, November 8, 2005, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Mmmmm, loved the taste and grit of this, dear one, where the hell did you go? ~ wen

  • abattoir On Thursday, September 1, 2005, abattoir (115)By person wrote:

    this was dirty.I can smell your style. its so unique*blue eyes.

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, August 30, 2005, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    your words capture so much with this structure.......your prose draws my soul every time my love..............urban

  • Mr King On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    hot

  • NikesRain On Thursday, June 9, 2005, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    this is divine, the feel and flow like silk sheets dragging across the skin, wonderfully sensuous......sublime

  • Loneal On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Loneal (86)By person wrote:

    Very direct - emotions/thoughts are sudden and "right now". Great write! ~L./Syn.Dark.

  • VenomPlease On Sunday, May 15, 2005, VenomPlease (134)By person wrote:

    Wow, great choice of words to say the least. This is excellent.

  • A former member wrote: oh my god great write

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Great write. Wonderful use of words, you are a walking dictionary ~*~Tart~*~

  • DarkDruidess On Saturday, May 14, 2005, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    completely beautiful...I was lost in the words that were portrayed...

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