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Tangible Lies
By Rachel
It's been said before
We only love that which cannot last.
You were so obviously fading,
I couldn't help myself.
And oh, the time we could have saved
had you been tangible.
And oh, the tears to never fall
if I were true.
Apologies mean nothing
in today's world of
Professional liars
and
Guns for hire.
But you can't say I haven't tried.
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Copyright 2005 Rachel
Published on Wednesday, May 11, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Tangible Lies"
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A former member wrote:
Forgiveness is a virtue. Carrying a grudge rots your soul.
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On Monday, May 30, 2005, Ravenblade
(313)
wrote:
This hit very close to home for me, loved every line. It is great to see you up and posting again...you have been missed...>Raven
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful work...love you Rachel
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
Very nice write, I love your work. About time you got online and posted something. You've been missed. (Or I have bad timing?)
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A former member wrote:
'we only love that which cannot last' so true. i liked. good job
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, wandering druid
(79) wrote:
Wow...I can feel this resonating within. Your words are amazing.
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
Pick the words straight from my little black heart why don't you?!!? This stands so tall and true beside my own thoughts/feelings. You own my day! thank you ~b
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