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i swallow
By mysticventures
the taste
is bittersweet
in my mouth
but does the fruit of my labor
truly justify
the flavor?
does the end
truly justify
the means?
.
.
.
.
if Einstein
was
correct
and if Jesus
spoke
the truth
and if the Buddha
was
enlightened
.
.
.
.
then Karma
truly is
good medicine
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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, April 26, 2005.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
Wow. I didn't expect that ending. Clever poem.
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A former member wrote:
Love your work.. but Ive learned this much in my travels: Karma is a Bitch... at times :)
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On Sunday, October 16, 2005, nell
(271)
wrote:
very cute, and full of truth;) loved the simpleness of it=D
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, LiP Stiches
(42) wrote:
Karma is GREAT MEDICINE!!!!
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A former member wrote:
after reading this machiavelli, i'm sure would question whether the end justifies the means. very well stated. ....-samone
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A former member wrote:
Wow. I guess some of us will never know. Interestingly introspective write all the same :) ~Ship!
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On Saturday, July 30, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
you know ...
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On Saturday, July 30, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
sweet ...., einstein , jesus , and buddha ... you marched out the big three ... great piece ... funguy
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On Saturday, July 16, 2005, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
hhmmmm......very thought provoking...*is trying to actually think*
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On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Hhmm.. Makes you wonder. Great write!
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
Nice write to stimuate poets. Karma doesn't come back to you. It is presented to you by yourself.
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A former member wrote:
Karma, as far as im concerned is like pride... You either do do much, or to little, either way, somehow your pride is effected.
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
you are a philosophical genius.....and i love the title~elisa
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A former member wrote:
mmm profound man, profound
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, PoeticMindBlow
(22) wrote:
Hmm. Good work!!
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
a conceptual piece - titled merely to grab your attention Jedi - guess it worked :)
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
yes, Silent Stalker - you got it right my friend :)
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
heh medicine doesn't work unless it tastes bad, that's how you know or so it's claimed ;) nicely done
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...people could learn much from this...
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
ok but im only leaving this comment so the devil doesnt get us ~kristy :P
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
HAha .. very clever - I like this
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On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
god...can i come kidnap you for a little while and soak in your brilliance? you are truly a wonder dear and i pray i never see the day you stop sharing your beautiful soul with us ~kristy
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On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
interesting title.... and the write is also good and interesting
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