Please, One more, Please

By ashottothetemple

Damn the tension that builds
You could cut it with a spork
Stuff like:
"I want you so bad"
"Im wet" and
"Fuck me" come
To my mind at these times
And the tears I cried when you left
Weren't a damn thing
Compared to how I
Fell for you
When you came back home
This single purpose has driven me
Pushed me and yet
Fucked me
To a distilled point where
Your juices are my eternal
Fountain of youth
Come to me one last time
Y let me enjoy what you offer
And goodnight

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Copyright 2005 spirett
Published on Monday, April 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"
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  • bloody LOVEly On Sunday, July 17, 2005, bloody LOVEly (86)By person wrote:

    written at such a different time, and yet exactly how I feel today. You proved the complication of this situation in your words. I love it.

  • A former member wrote: Caution: Do not read in public. -_-

  • eastpatient On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, eastpatient (47)By person wrote:

    Word. I'm currently in the same situation. Don't even think I could express it as eloquently, though.

  • K_Love On Monday, April 4, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Heartbreaking, and drenching, every word pure and beautiful. So damn real. Lovely write

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