my kurupt mind

By mysticventures




I can see

into your mind

and I know your thoughts



I can see

into your dreams

and I know your fantasies



I can see

into your heart

and I know your desires



I can see

into your soul

and I know we are one

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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Monday, March 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: The point of this poem is short but amazing, it kind of just hits you in the last three lines, excellent work

  • vaultgrl On Thursday, October 6, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ....i love the way of your words.....great write.....beautiful

  • Northstar On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    peaceful yet penetrating---these are words every good sub would love to hear *wink*

  • AniDayz On Monday, March 14, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    wonderfully done...absolutely beautiful ...

  • Sin On Monday, March 14, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    lovely from the first line to the last...i love your works ~kristy

  • manywalks On Monday, March 14, 2005, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    a perfect cadence for a perfect little read, simplistic and beautiful. ~ wen

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