fucking stars

By mysticventures






the stars


align themselves


with my anus


.

.

.


to once again


fuck me


.

.

.


without benefit


of any


ethereal lube









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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, March 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • elisa On Friday, May 1, 2009, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    the universe knows how to make us feel like dirty whores. excellent piece :P

  • A former member wrote: Damn AssStars.

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, April 17, 2008, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    This was top banana..:) -Carl

  • A former member wrote: Damn it is good to scroll back through your stuff.

  • nell On Sunday, October 16, 2005, nell (271)By person wrote:

    ROFL nicely done

  • A former member wrote: lmao..woot.

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, July 30, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    *shudder* interesting metaphor you chose there... but I'm with you... fate's a bitch (in this case... wearing a strap-on)

  • capt_funguy On Saturday, July 30, 2005, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    this was perfect perfection ... very cool .... funguy

  • blue On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    :) fucking brilliant! ~b

  • PoeticHellion On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    That... is so... funny.

  • Thorn On Monday, July 11, 2005, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    Ain't that a bitch? Such is life, though. I greatly enjoyed reading this; GREAT finish.

  • A former member wrote: Haha, this was fucking great. Thank you.

  • manywalks On Thursday, March 17, 2005, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    This brought out the sadist in me, I snickered.

  • manywalks On Thursday, March 17, 2005, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    No, to be honest, I laughed, coffee through my nose at the total unexpectedness...oh well, needed to swipe a cloth over the keyboard anyway.

  • A former member wrote: ouch! that's all I got

  • Mr King On Friday, March 4, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    hah... that was funny... ironically... i know how you feel... the agony of the ecstasy... 1, Seth

  • A former member wrote: this gave me a chuckle, thank you, in your pain you have brought much joy

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, March 1, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Talk about a flaming asshole, eh?

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, March 1, 2005, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...this sounds like something a military person would write...just because we're used to getting fucked so damn much...nicely worded; can't say I don't know the feeling... Scholar

  • Sin On Tuesday, March 1, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    ummm ouch...sometimes it just seems like the world is out to screw you...you might want to put some ice on that ;) ~kristy

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, March 1, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    I'd have to agree.

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