p.s. i love you

By elisa

before I tell you how i feel...
...i want you to know

i know the reason for every curve in every word

i can site the hebrew meaning of every backward latin symbol

i know what flows and why

i can spell it out exactly right




'i love you'




cliché as it may be
it will have to do
(for now)


i know i
and
i know you
let love be infinite

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Copyright 2005 elisa
Published on Sunday, February 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Star On Saturday, April 27, 2013, Star (920)By person wrote:

    beautiful breathtaking words here, elisa. *sigh* (:

  • johnbevan17 On Wednesday, October 5, 2011, johnbevan17 (52)By person wrote:

    p.s I love you. I love this elisa sometimes I think, people think they say those three words to much. though there's not much else to say when you fall in love and feel that way. awesome write and to the point Thank you for sharing :)

  • A former member wrote: Aw! I loved this! Sometimes, I get frustrated too. I never feel like "I love you" is enough.

  • A former member wrote: p.s...... I miss you.... these meanings you write of... hmmmmm may i taste the infinite within you?

  • A former member wrote: I know your are my friend but we all are alone in this world of Flows!?

  • Err0r On Saturday, July 21, 2007, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    This is so tender. Your words carry such passion behind them. Very nice.

  • Enigma On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Enigma (91)By person wrote:

    Sweet!!! I love this one ...it's great.

  • A former member wrote: I AM ABSOLUTLY AWED BY THE SIMPLICITY AND BEAUTY OF YOUR WRITING STYLE.

  • elisa On Thursday, March 1, 2007, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    honestly.... thank you... i needed a smile:)

  • A former member wrote: I

  • SilentStalker On Sunday, May 28, 2006, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ..."I know I; and; I know you; let love be infinite"...those are some of the best words I've seen in quite a while... Scholar

  • suicidalsecrecy On Wednesday, November 2, 2005, suicidalsecrecy (43)By person wrote:

    simply an amazing piece. very talented writer. ~s.s.

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    bleeaahhh *gags* whroop, whroop, uck... bleeeeahhh! I'm painting the town spewy tonight!

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    ack, ack, ack... gruuuurp... erflllpppfffthh pt pt pthhht... garrrp... ooooogarrrp...

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    hugghhghhg... hughghghhhhhrrraaaaaghhh... whrooooop... bleeahh! Fuck that. Think I'm done. Ptht. Wait on... ack, ack, whrooooopbleah

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    *shudders* ... *whimpers* ... *shiver-sweat-tears*

  • elisa On Saturday, September 17, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    did ya have to bust a bulimic nut all over my 'i love you' ......damnit..;)

  • island warrior On Sunday, March 6, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Impressive to say the least. Rare beauty.

  • A former member wrote: simply beautiful..

  • AniDayz On Monday, February 28, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    wonderfully heartfelt creation...just absolute pure beaty...a kiss of words so full of love...beautiful.

  • Mr King On Monday, February 28, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    what more can be said... this is absolutely breath taking... 1, Seth

  • Im_going_to_cry_now On Sunday, February 27, 2005, Im_going_to_cry_now (24)By person wrote:

    ooh I am impress I bow before your superior writing skills

  • lordshadow On Sunday, February 27, 2005, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    beautiful... simplistic and wonderful.

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, February 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    this is a lovely write ... but i must say that love sucks..

  • Solace On Monday, February 28, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    *sigh*

  • elisa On Monday, February 28, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    *le seconde sigh*

  • Malice In Wonderland On Sunday, February 27, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    wonderful.... Scholar

  • Sticky Kitty On Sunday, February 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    hmm...-kitty

  • A former member wrote: This was so sweet and soft.. lovely write.

  • A former member wrote: wow, really beautiful, short n sweet...

  • Lord Kalgalath On Sunday, February 27, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    Awesome.

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