closer

By Sky Singer

i hold you in my eyes and
my heart breaks a little more each time
but with every new splinter
i come increasingly closer to reality
every step is one more move towards the goal-
completion.
i hold you in my sight and
day by day i grow stonger.
with a new realization i've let this all go-
i must be broken to be whole

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Copyright 2005 Jessica Anne Wolfe
Published on Thursday, February 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: A popular way to express this feeling, but in this work put in a way the simplicities make a good blunt statement. Mhm.

  • A former member wrote: this was short but very deep strong yet vunarable love itthe ending amazing ~~GOTHIC~~

  • AniDayz On Sunday, February 6, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    i love this...the ending just hits the nail on the head...beautiful*

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, February 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    very nice...i likes!


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