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unadulterated blankness
By liquid_emotion
You hit a plateau and forget what to say
The pattern repeats day after day
Your insides feel trapped, wrapped up in tape
Emotions are suffocating, thoughts without shape
Frustration, I swear, you wouldn't believe
Feelings of impotence, hard to concieve
Where does it go when it doesn't come out
You can't even whisper, let alone shout
Nothing's the same and nothing is new
Seeing the world through a blinded view
Agrivation surmounting, building with time
Then a flooding release with one simple rhyme
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Tuesday, February 25, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
I wish I had the release you got. I haven't written for a long time. Good stuff as usual liquid. :)
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On Thursday, February 27, 2003, Psyanide
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wrote:
you are worth my tears
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On Thursday, February 27, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
Wow. I'm truly honored...
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On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
That wet naps sounded more like a "damnit" than a "yay"...*laugh*
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On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
oh my fucking god! (i have a fucking god?... no wonder not much attention is paid the earth or my woes... he's obviuosly got better things... anyway)
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On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
you read my mind and expressed perfectly what i was going for in 'eat shit... and 'word a day...' you did much better. wet naps!
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On Tuesday, February 25, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
it's a comment continuum
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