Tell Me...
By Syn
Im tangled in my torment
fresh breath is turning dormant
Im pushing your further
as I only long to be together
My brain is playing tricks
Im falling victim to my sickness
Only I can claim the blame
as I fight to stay the same
Im the only cause of my demise
I see it every single time
Im the reason that I fall
though I try to give my all
I wish you could understand
know this wasnt part of the plan
and sometimes my weakness consumes me
and breaks every single dream
If you help me now we'll make it through
its a lot of pressure to put on you
but tell me Im hallucinating
and that we are far from breaking
Tell me its all inside my head
and we're not dangling by a thread
tell me everythings alright
and that Im not losing you tonight
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Copyright 2005 Syn
Published on Monday, January 24, 2005.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Tell Me..."
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This was great.. The last stanza, is so pleading.. very well done.. -Michael
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
the best part is always the ending :) wonderful write and beautifully expressed. well done
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A former member wrote:
Powerful comes to mind. Anything else i say, pales in comparison to this wonderful poem.
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On Monday, January 24, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Wow. I agree with S. Love. It was a magnificent write, and the last stanza brought it all to a wonderful close.
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On Monday, January 24, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Beautiful write, the last stanza floored my and hit me hard. Wonderful job, great flow and well-written.