I see me
By Cutting_for_Freedom
I see a girl
I see the marks on her arms
The marks she tries so desperatly to hide
I see the sadness in her heart
And the pain-filled tears as they run down her cheek
I see the bruises that are no longer there
The scars that have faded with time
I see the emotions she covers up with a smile
That smile
Her mask
I see past it all
I see the girl she tries to hide
The girl with broken dreams
Bad memories
Hate
Fear
Guilt
Depression
I see her eyes pleading silently for help
I see all of this and more
The girl I see...
...Is my reflection looking back at me...
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Copyright 2005 Cutting_for_Freedom
Published on Monday, January 24, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
so is this to get depressed girls into you
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On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, Berry Fantastic
(28) wrote:
Totally unexpected ending. I love the whole thing.
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On Thursday, September 1, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
twisted... to be the one who can look at the one who is already been one fucked up girl.I am.nice piece.
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A former member wrote:
beautifully painfull love the emotion this brings forth wonderful write
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, DarkSoul
(19) wrote:
We all have our times. Times to grieve. Times to look ahead. Times to forge new beginnings. This is apparently your time to shine. Great write. DP mail me ~DarkSoul
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On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
nicely done...i've been there before so good luck to ya!
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On Monday, January 24, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
Obvious emotion...very reflective write...nicely done.
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On Monday, January 24, 2005, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
wow very good-Danielle