Euphoric Delirium

By darkness_descends

Euphoric delerium sets in
As your nails of black penetrate my skin
Thrilled by the sensation of your touch
Overcome by an adrenaline rush
Lust for blood and flesh
A mixture of emotions complex
I feel you by tooth and nail
As I writhe and flail
Pain becomes pleasure
In this masacistic rapture
I move for your lips
As I long for your kiss
But you move out of reach
And my desire to touch you is increased
The need to feel you invades my head
Unable to move as I'm chained to you bed
Your razor blade fingers cause me lacerations
Doubling already insurmountable excitation
Building towards the sky
As I see passions fire in your eye
Your tounge explores my body
Leaving me hungry
For the taste of your kiss
The touch of my love, my sadist
But you like to tease
So you stop as I beg you please
I yearn for more
But control is yours
I gave myself over to you
And you decide what to do
Enjoying your break
And the torture of making me wait
Unlike any I've ever known
Just when I feel like I'm going to explode
You pounce on me like a lust crazed tigress
Attacking me with a gentle kiss
Followed by a vicious claw
Making my skin go raw
Ice fire courses my veins
Making me shiver from the chilling hot pain....




This is still a work in progress and I suspect far from done but I wanted some
objective opinions from my fellow DP memeber.... I would appreciate your input
Thanx Hugh_moreless

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Published on Sunday, August 18, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: The imagery here and choice of words is perfect. I love, love, love the flow and the way it was put together. The poem itself was excellent, and idea of having to wait for someone you long for is a well known feeling that a lot of people can relate too. Very vivid, very nice, I absolutely loved it, every word of it!

  • Liz On Monday, May 10, 2004, Liz (267)By person wrote:

    Oh, this is vivid enough to make me miss it very much. This is going very well and I hope you continue with it. If you want more specific suggestions for form or word choice, feel free to DP mail me.

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