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Inner Struggle with Outer Beings
By flying_fox
The time is now for realisation
tearful thoughts and resignation,
quite possibly an altercation
Or perhaps I'll walk away...
I'm sure you'll think it's fabrication
my hurt and pain hallucination
if you can't see my soul's deflation
there's nothing left to say.
I honoured you with adulation
spoke loving praise in conversation
Defending you, no reservation
But mine is not your way.
So do I speak, have confrontation
or hide away in desperation?
There's nothing worse than separation,
but it's happening today.
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Copyright 2005 flying_fox
Published on Thursday, January 20, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Inner Struggle with Outer Beings"
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2008, Dr Benway
(48)
wrote:
Every word exactly where it should be, perfect.
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On Thursday, September 8, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
ah, the eternal internal conflict: damned if you do... damned if you don't... in the following order: by someone else; by yourself.
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On Saturday, February 5, 2005, birdwell
(140) wrote:
i too, am thrilled to see a new poem from you... a very saddening poem ~db~
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A former member wrote:
well expressed powerful piece
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On Friday, January 21, 2005, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
Glad to see you back, nice rhyme style. You make "seperation" sound peaceful or at least that was how i read it.
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A former member wrote:
Lovely rhythm. *sigh* I miss your posts soooooooo much.
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On Thursday, January 20, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
woohoo, a new posting from you! *dances about and bumps into things* Powerfully effective melancholic almost-resignation in that final line; and the title rocks too. Great write!
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On Thursday, January 20, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
excellent write and rhyme.
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On Thursday, January 20, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
liked the title,superb flow and rhyme, this gave rise to many feelings i have
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