TimeWarpedMind

By mysticventures





TIME wreaks havoc

upon the WARPED images

in my MIND

DOOMED to forever wonder

the WARPED and never-ending

corridors of TIME

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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Monday, January 17, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very beautiful and great execution though I question the capitalization.

  • A former member wrote: I really enjoy how you described the transformation of memories over time!

  • mysticventures On Saturday, December 5, 2009, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    damn dude thanks - but what is Poem of the Day?

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, December 5, 2009, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...haha; one poem gets featured every day, and this one came up for the day marked...click on the icon to see the entire listing so far... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Wow, well done! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: its not linear for sure... Time is the circle and we're all just running along it, good write in its direct approach Scholar

  • lordshadow On Thursday, February 17, 2005, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    Short and succinct... incredibly profound.

  • DarkWolf On Monday, January 31, 2005, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    This was killer.. I love it though I cannot say for certain why.. wandering the corridors of time.. that hits me.. awesome write sir. -Michael

  • Zhee On Tuesday, January 25, 2005, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    you said it perfectly! it is indeed the abyss that never ends....

  • elisa On Monday, January 17, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ...but would you really want this ride to ever end..? me neither:) beautifully said Mr. Mystic:)

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