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foreshadowing a death
By hopeless
I'll lay on your grave just to tell you i love you,
A pulse
My heartbeat
is all you need to know
and all i wish to hear
But i wont
Your ghost will sit at the edge of my bed as I sleep,
Dance with me when rain falls so sadly, outlining your figure,
Watch me walk through the crowd toward the stage,
Listen to the song pouring from my heart, by words unspoken,
Cradle my heart when I realize your gone,
and put me back together
When I am Finally Dead...
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Copyright 2005 hopeless
Published on Saturday, January 8, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Just absolutely classic, brilliant piece. Perfectly wrought. -Carl
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Dark_Goddess
(13) wrote:
My father took his life when I was 18 and he was the only family I had, I can feel what you say.
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Captivating piece.
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On Saturday, January 8, 2005, Gideon Lost
(138) wrote:
Melancholy and dark and beautiful. Mourning is so personal yet you share it so well. This was heart felt.
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On Saturday, January 8, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
you know how i feel about this work, it is mesmorizing.my heart stopped for the duration i read,a timeless work. i cant do justice with my words
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