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Space within a word, i spoke goodnight to your lips
By hopeless
Your taking up a space within nothing.
time
uncontrolled, death demands your beautiful heart...
your words piercing the soul of a love you do not know.
a
flower blooms not in the shadow of your hatred, but
consumes the beauty around it...
to be beautiful in its self...
but you will not allow it, a passion that continues to compare
your heart to that of a tsunami...
your death...
takes my soul far from me...
what
will you do then?
release the pause
and
kiss me
as the band begins to play our death
a song coiled
in the moody waters
the mud sticking
and becoming soft earth against your body...
i know not
a man nor woman i speak of... i just speak hoping someone will hear
my words....
goodnight,
sweet
dreams shall come to thee if thou whilst lay your heavy heart
upon this pillowed mind pitied, lonesome, grieving for the worlds
beauty to die...
Love always....
Bernadette
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Copyright 2005 hopeless
Published on Monday, January 3, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Space within a word, i spoke goodnight to your lips"
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On Monday, April 25, 2005, Anth
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wrote:
this is a masterpiece of your works, the deepness and perfection of the first seven lines is staggering
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On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
I love the expression with the big words and little words and underlined words and stuff. Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Monday, April 25, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
thats the best comment ever!
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this work is crushing, you put so much emotion in your works,leaves me with too many emotions to ever muster a decent comment,just know that i really felt this
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
this is very very cool
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
within a night, within a dream.. i lay these words to rest, down by your soft hair, and green moss.. in the twilight of a bitter heart ache... ///
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