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Tempted to hold you forever
By ashottothetemple
Oh my fucking gawd
Another street phrase
Ill use it here because
You taste so good
Your navel, your forhead
Your neck, your earlobe
The metal encased inside ur ears
Your lips were like heroin
I needed them the most
Your arms wrapped around me
Even when she walked in the door
Neither one wanting to let go
Cuddled closely played roughly
I love that feeling of
Being in control
Pulling you up for another
Hint of those lips, those sensual
Most spectacular lips
Your hair in my eyes
What could be better
You're breathing heavy now
I can feel your chest against mine
I can feel your legs entwined
This was never a good poem
Nothing could ever be good enough
For your beauty, your style, and
Your slient but
Perfect kiss
I dont want any comments on this as it was a complete work of crap, she
deserves so much better but Im not good enough.
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Copyright 2005 spirett
Comments on "Tempted to hold you forever"
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A former member wrote:
oh, this is heaven in every way possible... pure and incandescent bliss. your words always always have the potency to make me believe in what's real again.
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On Sunday, January 2, 2005, K_Love
(525)
wrote:
"Your lips were like heroin I needed them the most" That line fucking made my mouth drop... awesome.. just awesome.. HA I LEFT YOU ANOTHER COMMENT!
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On Sunday, January 2, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
This was beautiful, you get better everytime I read your work. AND I'M SORRY FOR THE COMMENT CUZ U DESERVE IT SO HA!!! hehe ~Kirsten~
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A former member wrote:
hmm... it doesnt sound that way.
sorry for the comment -ally
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