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abstract ideations of comfort and co-dependancy
By Jonas
i'm drunk on cheap wine
and i'm thinking
of you
and 'you' describes
some sort of comfortable feminine abstract
on who's breasts i can rest my head
and hear a gentle heartbeat
underneath the
skin
and
bone
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Copyright 2004 Jonas
Published on Thursday, December 30, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
i know this feeling but..in a different light obviously hehe... nice to see works from you hope there is more to come
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A former member wrote:
i thought this was very beautiful
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On Friday, December 31, 2004, purr_verse
(1059)
wrote:
ahh, quiet fantasies...so much less complicated than the full 3D experience... This is marvellously expressed; clear without overstatement, and...well, just right. I realise the banality of that last statement, and I'm sorry for my lack of clearer express
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On Friday, December 31, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
expression; you deserve a better comment for this excellent write. Outstanding.
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On Thursday, December 30, 2004, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
such dreams we keep. alone. and knowing the tide, will forever ebb.. you never flow.
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On Thursday, December 30, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
i agree with six, seems like there is more to say. but it is lovely. . and perhaps the length was intentional. . but it was a lot of greatness in such few words. . ;)
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On Thursday, December 30, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Sounds unfinished. Sometimes short is better, but this left me wanting more...unless that's what you were going for.
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On Thursday, December 30, 2004, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
sweetness
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On Thursday, December 30, 2004, Jonas
(720) wrote:
i so hate you.
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