Sadness

By darkness_descends

Sadness deeper than an ocean envelops me,
And my eyes blurred by salty tears can no longer see.
Where once a smile had peeked
Is now a face sullen, dirty, and streaked.
Heavy beats my heart, pumping blood through my veins,
My body becoming nothing more than a mere vessel for pain.
But 'tis far more than anyone is seeing.
It is pain, white hot, in every fiber of my being.
I am left broken and distraught,
Torn by something far worse than any imagination could have thought...
The simple human heart.

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Published on Tuesday, July 2, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Circe Avalon On Friday, November 2, 2007, Circe Avalon (115)By person wrote:

    I really like this work. You made me want to cry...good write.

  • Tracer On Friday, March 19, 2004, Tracer (100)By person wrote:

    Very simple, but conveying a complex emotion, I can see where this is coming from..."My body becoming nothing more than a mere vessel for pain.", I like your use of metaphors...nice write...^vTracerv^ Scholar

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