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Soul Advocate
By A_Puppet_Show
Blackness seem piercing on unhealthy white,
and in-between no confidentiality of blood;
An ocean stand divided by empty ships,
controled by young and elder lips,
But did we not float? it was I,
that brought aboard the gun,
I, but what sacrifice?
that this thought is not to bear;
A moment before resignation,
no one shall deem us destructive,
portray a grand collapse;
No we all reach to embrace in the end.
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Copyright 2004 Blinded_Tiger
Published on Monday, December 27, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Solace
(1069)
wrote:
Its the words that fail me, you see they never say enough of what I feel, muted what expression can I give but the barest one, but the compliments of a man that lives within words, what could i possibly give in return
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Solace
(1069) wrote:
in return for all your services, whether aware or unaware of them, nonetheless i feel indebted...i've nothing of worth but words...and i'm yet to figure if i have any with enough worth...
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Solace
(1069) wrote:
I will repay you some day my friend, whether your realise it or not in my own way I shall pay homage to all that I have taken from you...Thank You
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Storm
(143) wrote:
"No one shall deem us destructive" Don't know why but you almost make me want to see Titanic... *shudders* What can I say, you did it again Tiger. ~
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On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Thats great, I didnt think of that. Made me laugh too ^^ Sad eyes and laughs, thats how it goes.
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
I think anth sumed up how I felt about this. You have a gift for not over doing it with words. You say what needs to be said to get your point across. Your words are amazing. This was....just very well done.
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On Monday, December 27, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
My god...that was a beautiful write! Well done indeed! ~b
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On Monday, December 27, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
wonderful. A_C
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On Monday, December 27, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this is a great write, i felt like i was just dropped into a heated scene of a film,theres a skill in what you leave out, and how you present your works, i enjoyed delving into this
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On Monday, December 27, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
yes, i completely agree. lovely.
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