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transition
By urbanhumility
my mind is numb...
no longer do i wield the strenth that i had...
my visions of grandure are fading into melencholy....
my grasp of love is becoming less articulate......
my wise words are are becoming more rather than less......
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I Must belive.......
I Will practice dicipline, and therfore gain strenth...
I Will dream of my "First Self" and I will see again...
I Will love myself, there fore i will be able to love others..
I will gain my wisdome ...........by being born again....
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Copyright 2004 urbanhumility
Published on Wednesday, December 22, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
My transition transitioned on me just recently, it's amazing to be able to feel again.
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670)
wrote:
How is it that one can touch me in a different way, with each write, but still touch me in the same spot? Your soul is boundless, as is your talent. You are beautiful. Julia~
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A former member wrote:
This reminded me of Pantera. "I'm born again.. becoming godsize!" Oooh, nice write.
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On Friday, February 18, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
words of wisdom...nicely done
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On Saturday, February 5, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
happy we are, to read this... 1LOVE ALWAYS, Seth & Trish
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Jonas
(720) wrote:
change burns like ultra-violet radiation can't see it can't touch it but it burns your skin palpably as it peels through old layers and itch and sting and peel and new skin pokes through. much love, mr. humility.
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
I've had these similar thoughts inside my head ..specially the "being reborn" line ...very existential and thoughtful ..again, you make poetry alive.
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A former member wrote:
great write
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
very nicely done. full of inner strength and inner wisdom...*inspiring*
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
It's poets like you that make me like this site again... in between all of the nonsensical bullshit, you remind me that talent is still alive.
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
:::turns into a bridge:::
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
I understand what it is like to feel these elements of oneself slip away into the night, and what a challenge it is to reclaim them--this is quite well expressed
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
I like. Sort of like a code of honor... type of thing. Great work
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
this was just crazy awesome. many words of lessons learned bleed from this piece.
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