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A creation of my hopelessness
By hopeless
Creation
is it a timeless wonder
where pain is unknown
a heartbreak
out lives a heartbeat
what more of a perfect world
can be created with purity
running amongst sharp rocks...
If only i had your wings,
it is a devistating crossing
over an ocean of tears,
only to get to you...
and id brave being burned
at the stake a thousand times
before i ever gave up...
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Copyright 2004 hopeless
Published on Sunday, December 19, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
amazing, breath taking, i'm overwhelmed
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Anth
(1133)
wrote:
seems to read differently now that i return, as if it was mirrored, as it is, a thousand more
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A former member wrote:
First time in a damn long time that I've read something that made me feel so much. The last verse is imprinted on my eye lids and etched on my soul. I experienced the ecstasy and pain that comes from a martyr's burning all at once. Definitely a fave.
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Awesome write.
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On Monday, December 20, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
*is speechless.literally, damn*
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
such intense passion and feeling,longing despair and hope in this, a poem ill not forget
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