The Thing About Sex

By Angelic Darkness

Fingers tracing my skin.

I really want to fight.

My attempts are failing at not giving in.

You're making me lose my might.

Seductive and it presses me harder.

Desire overwhelms my mind.

I know you're trying to break me.

You touched my hair softly.

Why can't these thoughts just leave my head.

I wanted to die right here and now.

You muttered at me, but I can't hear what you said.

Arms slide possessively around my waist.

I wish I had a gun.

Lips pressing hungrily to my neck.

I scratch your back.

You groan into my shoulder.

My teeth sink into your skin.

Can't you stop killing me?

My eyes flash dimly and I clutch my pillow to my face.

Looking around my empty room,

Your voice is ringing in my ears though your not here.

I sigh.

You see, the thing about sex is. . .

There has to be two people to have it.

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Published on Sunday, December 19, 2004. Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"

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Comments on "The Thing About Sex"

On Monday, December 4, 2017, Cassette (1144) wrote:

This was great
A former member wrote: Love this!!
A former member wrote: It appears, mentally there WAS two people there. But that's probably not good enough :-P Nice write, if not a bit restless and with poiny things sticking out of it here and there.
On Monday, March 8, 2010, Deaths Apostle (65) wrote:

Hahaha...Nice ending
On Thursday, October 15, 2009, jajang829 (23) wrote:

Fantastic Write... I actually had multiple memories and thoughts pop into my head with each line... very well done....
On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

great twist... i love it ~*~TART~*~
A former member wrote: Wonderful write, ver original and well i liek the twist at the end. I didn't see it coming.
On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (54) wrote:

*sigh* I loved it, thats all I can say in this comment... *wink*.
A former member wrote: haha! i really like that. especially the last two lines!
On Sunday, January 23, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus (140) wrote:

sex....doesn't need two people. sometimes just one. ;) A_C
On Sunday, January 23, 2005, Angelic Darkness (27) wrote:

Dearies, Dearies, that's not sex, that's masturbation. *Winks.* ~*~Angie~*~
A former member wrote: Not necessarily, try making love to yourself every once in a while.
On Thursday, January 20, 2005, DarkWolf (415) wrote:

*laughing* very good, very funny write. Thank you for this one. -Michael
A former member wrote: right the hell on!!
A former member wrote: i really loved this good emotion thank you
A former member wrote: i LOVED this... it was amazing. great write, and very original ending. -sorrow
On Friday, January 14, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918) wrote:

magnificently beautiful...
On Monday, January 3, 2005, Cinn (152) wrote:

Oh I loved this. Didn't see the ending coming at all. Awesome awesome awesome. -Cinn
On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Dei (665) wrote:

omg... yeah.. i majorly felt this one. incredible write. im very impressed. thank you for writing this
On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Angelic Darkness (27) wrote:

*Blushing profusely.* Thank you, I don't think I've ever had so many comments come in on one of my works in just a day like this. ~*~Angie~*~
On Sunday, December 19, 2004, JiNx (98) wrote:

Wow this is exceptionally incredible!!! This is an awesome poem! -JiNx(ie)
On Sunday, December 19, 2004, AniDayz (820) wrote:

oh holy shit...this is WONDERFUL*EXCEPTIONAL* i love it...i definetly relate,more than i can say. this is going on my favs**GREAT JOB
On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Northstar (375) wrote:

ohhhh damn I know exactly what you mean--very nice work here--the ending is like a left hook
On Sunday, December 19, 2004, Sin (1168) wrote:

damn those technicalities...but some of the most beautiful moments are the ones we keep to ourselves, wonderful write ~kristy
A former member wrote: great write