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Silent Screams
By darkness_descends
Deafend my my silent screams,
Tortured by my private dreams.
Some invade me with tumescent intentions,
Others with horrors I fear to mention.
My mind I can no longer control,
I feel I've become a helpless drone.
I'm alive but I feel mostly dead,
Tortured by the blood stained images in my head.
I fear sleep,
For the horrors that creep.
But alas I wake to another day,
Filled with pain as I try to run away.
The pain in my heart and the burning in my chest,
I can only describe as unbearable at best.
No longer can I hear the voices in my dreams,
Because I've been deafened by my silent screams.
(Comments are greatly appreciated)
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Published on Tuesday, November 13, 2001.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Silent Screams"
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A former member wrote:
Wow this is really really good!
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A former member wrote:
u r a very talented writer i love all your work
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A former member wrote:
i like it alot.makes me think of when i wake up to a cold empty apartment
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436)
wrote:
that last line really drove it home...great piece here hun...i can feel you in this...and in me as I read it..thank you..*Vel*
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Zahgurim
(29) wrote:
That hit close to home. I often find it hard to give comments because I'm afraid of being repetitive. I really enjoyed this piece. No bullshit. I feel that this is really deep with a large amount of feeling soaked into each word. You cured my writing bloc
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
i read this one before i joined this site, loved it then love it now .. good job:)
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On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
you have got to be my favorite artist so far...This is yet another great piece.
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A former member wrote:
awesome....i felt like that before....very good
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A former member wrote:
So dark and truthful. Excellent piece!
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A former member wrote:
very well written
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A former member wrote:
Again all i can say is WOW. Your work is sooo powerful.
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A former member wrote:
Another awesome work...god, I love it all.
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