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Flowing
By liquid_emotion
golden light that casts long
shadows over the sand
reflects off my eyes and
gives peace to my soul
I dance slowly moving my hips
with the swaying palms
and the gentle tinkling
of carribean drums
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Friday, February 21, 2003.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Flowing"
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A former member wrote:
This has a very comforting a serene feel to it that leaves the mind ready to daydream. Very enjoyable:) ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
I loved this, great work.. ~cold~
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On Thursday, May 29, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511)
wrote:
Soothing...slow and cadent...very smooth. You have managed a perfect snap shot in words...wonderful.~DW~
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On Tuesday, April 22, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
nicely captured ... the moment inwhich we all live to experience .. a perfect fluid running down into the state of total trancendance ... wonderful write:
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A former member wrote:
I now know why I like this poem - couldn't put my finger on it - and will finally comment on it. This obviously is a moment you cherish. Those moments, and similar ones are the things that make one truly happy.
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A former member wrote:
And the reason it, to me, reflects true happiness, is because these cherished moments that fill our hearts with joy at any time, whether sad or happy, can never be taken away from us. That is why life is liveable.
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On Friday, February 21, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
ahhh, sweet peace floats on a warm breeze
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A former member wrote:
ooo how peaceful liquid =o)
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On Friday, February 21, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
i too have experienced this feeling,"Nassau and St.Thomas"thanx for the imagery.u.h.ps. i like "reflects off my eyes, and gives peace to my soul"
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