Arwen's Song

By Atalanta

My tears flow
Flow like the silk garments I wear
They fall for you
My dear Aragorn
My love, my life
My heart knows you were right
In going with Frodo
I have told you that
Now you arein great danger
And my heart cries
My lovely Aragorn
Carry my face intobattle with you
Savor the memory of my kisses
Keep the Evenstar close to your heart
Father tells me I should go
Into the West
Forsaking any hope of
A mortal life with you
Now....
Defeat looks certain
And we will all perish
I go now into the West
I love you
Good-bye


**I am a huge Lord of the Rings fan. This poem is just rambleing,but this is what I feel that Arwen would say to Aragorn*

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Copyright 2004 Atalanta
Published on Monday, December 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • HeadpatSlut On Saturday, September 11, 2010, HeadpatSlut (259)By person wrote:

    For rambling it's a quite entrancing piece, I can feel the heartbreak in it and I'm impressed, thanks for sharing. :) Scholar

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, September 2, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    I rather like this one, it is pretty, believable and flows well. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • BeautifulCalamity On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    and by the way, thank you for appointing me the queen . . . I will carry the title well I hope ;)

  • BeautifulCalamity On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    lol, never seen the movie, but it sounds nice. . . you are a devoted fan lanta, *smiles*

  • Delphoid-Q On Monday, December 6, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    I'm not quite sure what to say to this as a LoTR purist... I think you have captured the essence of Arwen's character, though Tolkien did not tell us very much about her...

  • Delphoid-Q On Monday, December 6, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    All but her abandoning Aragorn at the end - i can't believe she would have done that.

  • A former member wrote: Extraordinary..yes sir u rock!

  • Draven On Monday, December 6, 2004, Draven (45)By person wrote:

    im not intirely positive but i think they did something like this but never put it in the book, but as usual i could be wrong.. very nice though i liked it

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