Can Josh Seduce You?

By Revolting Theatre

Would it help if I told you your lips (friendly as they are to the poet)
make me st-st-stutter on paper?
Or should I suggest that Heaven be paved with pictures of your eyes instead of gold?

Perhaps a kiss on the small of your back?
A kiss that takes slow steps to find the sweetest spot
of flesh on the back of your neck.

You'd find my hands have ten close friends that might push themselves to places forbidden from most men.
All to make you smile, to shorten your breath.
It's hard to conjure dreams much better than that.

I'd steal your feet from under you,
handcuff each limb twice.
My mind gives me a helpful hint,
Would you prefer candle wax...or ice?

I'd pull your hair, drag my nails downs your spine,
p u s h the pleasure out your mouth, just to hear your
brandy brushed voice.

My thoughts are bright light in an empty white room.
You can't escape.
They surround you.

...Would you like to fall in love tonight?
I have a palace just your size.
It exists underneath my covers,
Where you'd be named queen.

Lists of wants await your words.
I'll shower you with fantasy.
Zig-zag's are unnessacary I'll b-line to the point.
Tonight is your night.
Anything you want.
Whatever you enjoy.

A poem a day with the title your name,
can make a man so anxious.
I'm craving you, and I've thought this through.
When we meet, I'll start with a kiss.

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Copyright 2004 Revolting Theatre
Published on Monday, December 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Killerdemonchick On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, Killerdemonchick (125)By person wrote:

    Josh can definately seduce me.:) Wax please

  • Devilish On Sunday, September 30, 2012, Devilish (3797)By person wrote:

    I'm your huckleberry baby.. damn.. touch me Scholar

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Sunday, September 30, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (332)By person wrote:

    Oh dear God, Josh has thoroughly seduced me. If you need me I'll be taking a cold shower and waiting for seconds.

  • A former member wrote: the answer is yes..and I prefer the wax ;)

  • Gideon Lost On Friday, February 13, 2009, Gideon Lost (140)By person wrote:

    Such a sensuous piece. I loved the language and alitteration. Made me wish Josh was gay so I could enjoy him too. - Gideon

  • Aurora_Light On Monday, December 29, 2008, Aurora_Light (482)By person wrote:

    The description in this is well done and the detail amazing. I had a night like this not to long ago and you captured the feelings of it so well if this work.

  • The Lipstick Factor On Saturday, November 8, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (295)By person wrote:

    I've read this piece several times without comment--so many times, in fact, I'm feeling a bit peeping-tomish sneaking up for a read and skulking off again. Yes, Josh can seduce me--in fact he already has. Stunning write, love the way I get wrapped up in it. I am especially fond of the fourth stanza and the close is brilliant and seductive.

  • Mars On Monday, April 28, 2008, Mars (337)By person wrote:

    this is awesome. -mars Scholar

  • MGood On Sunday, March 23, 2008, MGood (61)By person wrote:

    this is truly beautiful. ~M

  • totaltrip On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, totaltrip (36)By person wrote:

    i love you. i love you. i love you. i want you. i want you. i want you. sigh. nice. nice. nice. you have me repeating myself to catch up with my thoughts.

  • thelostmessenger On Thursday, June 21, 2007, thelostmessenger (115)By person wrote:

    can josh seduce you? yep, he can. lol. this poem is amazing. made me squirm in my seat... lovely. *messenger

  • Carmina Gitana On Monday, March 19, 2007, Carmina Gitana (159)By person wrote:

    I can't imagine any woman wouldn't love to read something like this - I love the lightness mixed in with the lust and the love. It's creamy and frothy at the same time.

  • A former member wrote: i have to say, i've read this poem many times before, and it is still one of my favorites.

  • beautifulfallenangel On Thursday, December 14, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (64)By person wrote:

    whoa.....amazingly beautiful, one lucky girl and it's amzingly sexy also....:)

  • Sin On Sunday, April 2, 2006, Sin (1179)By person wrote:

    this is still one of the most sexy/sensual poems ive read...

  • A former member wrote: "Zig-zag's are unnessacary I'll b-line to the point." yeah that's usually the problem....get lost on your way to the point for about na hour ok?..poem was alright i enjoy some of your other works better

  • A former member wrote: simply that this is a topic to me right now...sorry i'm a little cynical and disintrested in gushy emotional heartstring attachment stuff right now. Nothing personal or anything.

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, September 6, 2005, urbanhumility (1207)By person wrote:

    fucking brilliant......beautiful and sensual.............well done..........urban

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, September 6, 2005, flying_fox (596)By person wrote:

    yes Yes YES!!!!! *whoo hoo* I'm off for a cold shower. I'm favouriting this one... luscious, sensual erotic... *melts in chair*

  • A former member wrote: Hell you can call me tonight lol so we can see wuts up lol

  • A former member wrote: Wow, very seductive, nice piece.

  • icyhott On Thursday, July 14, 2005, icyhott (37)By person wrote:

    what can i say that hasn't been said already? except call me your queen and i'll call you my god *hott*

  • October Death On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, October Death (19)By person wrote:

    You can seduce me anyday. *Winks*

  • LovelyAssassinx On Saturday, May 14, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (153)By person wrote:

    Wow...Im seduced. lol. Nice work. ~Unlucky

  • Serenity On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Serenity (470)By person wrote:

    Oh this sent excitement through me. This is very seductive!

  • Elise On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Elise (197)By person wrote:

    *melts* I dunno what to say. Wow, I'm glad I found this.

  • Northstar On Monday, April 4, 2005, Northstar (387)By person wrote:

    wow--glad i stumbled onto this piece--captivating and sexy the entire way through--very saucy and seductive

  • eastpatient On Monday, April 4, 2005, eastpatient (51)By person wrote:

    Very seductive. Very nicely written. And slightly dirty. I like.

  • Sticky Kitty On Thursday, March 24, 2005, Sticky Kitty (253)By person wrote:

    simply lovely dearest enchanting -kitty

  • The Crimson Queen On Saturday, March 12, 2005, The Crimson Queen (928)By person wrote:

    all I can say is WOW...

  • Sin On Monday, January 10, 2005, Sin (1179)By person wrote:

    this was beautiful, tender, and very sensual. who wouldnt want to be seduced like this? amazing dear ~kristy

  • Cinn On Sunday, January 9, 2005, Cinn (158)By person wrote:

    Yes, yes definately seduced. Wow. Amazing write. -Cinn

  • Dei On Sunday, December 26, 2004, Dei (706)By person wrote:

    wow.... a lovely and sultry write. very impressive

  • BeautifulCalamity On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (434)By person wrote:

    and the very last stanza was perhaps the most lustrously loving I've read in awhile. .

  • BeautifulCalamity On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (434)By person wrote:

    "I'd pull your hair, drag my nails downs your spine, p u s h the pleasure out your mouth", so many beautiful lines in this. . heartmelting but seductive as well. . you can have me :P ;)

  • A former member wrote: *also seduced* awesome. id love to meet you.

  • A former member wrote: I agree with Liz. This was lustful yet gentle. I'm not even sure how to put it into words.

  • Liz On Monday, December 6, 2004, Liz (272)By person wrote:

    Seduction is not love, as you suggest falling into. But between the skill of the poet and the skill of the lover, you make both seem possible to me.

  • Liz On Monday, December 6, 2004, Liz (272)By person wrote:

    Erotica is rarely so heartfelt.

  • Drea On Monday, December 6, 2004, Drea (1521)By person wrote:

    Seductive indeed. This was heaven. The first line was genius. It give a girl thoughts that I almost forgot where there. For that...thank you, heh

  • Atalanta On Monday, December 6, 2004, Atalanta (38)By person wrote:

    *very seduced*

  • AniDayz On Monday, December 6, 2004, AniDayz (822)By person wrote:


  • Six-Out On Monday, December 6, 2004, Six-Out (1483)By person wrote:


  • Reverend On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, Reverend (82)By person wrote:

    what he said. ;)

  • A former member wrote: ehem.. haha. i agree with solace on this one. awesomely written, and very seductive, as you implied. nicely done. well written.

  • shortandpretentious On Monday, December 6, 2004, shortandpretentious (9)By person wrote:

    dirty... but wonderful

  • island warrior On Monday, December 6, 2004, island warrior (216)By person wrote:

    That would definitely seduce many women.

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