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running
By knightmirror
i'm retaliating against
laws of nature swirling
around my crown like
a whirlpool of liquid
wisdom
redirecting
courage
resurrecting
nightmares
i thought were long lost
but
they were lurking and listening
this whole time
i feel the overcoming
urge to leap from this
withering cloud of caligraphy
drawn colors of velvetiel
crimsonight
shimmeringreen
aquamber
plushazel
purplexed
voices screaming in eyes
beheld
by horrible hands of the holy
hologram
dancing in the moonbeams
of the suns rays
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Copyright 2004 knightmirror
Published on Saturday, December 4, 2004.
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On Saturday, January 29, 2011, Gray Vision
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wrote:
Couldn't agree more with Lily, this is beautifully written, alot of strong visuals are portrayed throughout this master piece of yours, well done. Thank you so much for sharing =)
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A former member wrote:
Outstanding piece, well written..Imad
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
lovely, evocative piece ('purplexed' - bonus highlycool points for that one!). Excellent imagery, excellent write.
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A former member wrote:
Damn man as the stanzas rolled by the pace nearly gave me a heart attack but I loved the ride. Great fuckin write. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
great write.
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
truly majestic....your words really weave magic....
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
ooooooh *dazzeled* i like i like thats one fuck of a picture you've painted here...-]darkness[-
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
*applaudes* well done. A_C
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
another example of your mastery of words, you never cease to amaze me ~kristy
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
this is intense....! somehow I know exactly what what your saying here........perfection sweets:) elisa
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