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Hello Helllo
By darkness_descends
Hello, Hello...
Are you there,
Do you still care?
When I talk
Does your mind take a walk?
I try to be patient,
But you seem so vacant.
Hello, Hello...
Are you there,
Do you still care?
Sometimes I wonder.
The girl I love... What happened to her?
Does she still exist?
If so tell her she is missed.
When I talked she used to hear,
Now my voice falls upon deaf ears.
Hello, Hello...
Are you there,
Do you still care?
You say you love me,
I used to believe,
But now I just don't know.
If you do it doesn't really show.
When I cried
You used to wonder why.
Now you don't even hear
The sound of my falling tears.
Hello, Hello
(comments are greatly appreciated)
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Published on Friday, October 19, 2001.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Hello Helllo"
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A former member wrote:
There goes a tear, I feel you pain. ~cold~
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, Twilight
(1786)
wrote:
i feel you pain too.
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On Sunday, March 16, 2003, diavolessa
(208) wrote:
this is such a sad poem. However everything is well said! ~i got the chills now~
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A former member wrote:
I know the feeling of deaf ears wide open...damn people choosing when to be deaf...yep
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