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lovely dark and deep
By shortandpretentious
tonight i've made a decision
i miss your hair your touch
these things i'll never get back
yeah they all say to forget
you say it too i try but sometimes
i roll over to the wall pretend
you're there say you're beautiful
& sleep with your ghost in my arms
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Copyright 2004 shortandpretentious
Published on Monday, November 29, 2004.
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On Friday, April 24, 2009, carlosjackal
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wrote:
*BANG!* You're in my Top 20 ;)
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, carlosjackal
(3014) wrote:
Ah, love it! Yet another piece of proof to back up my decision to fave you and another piece that gets me thinking, "Why the fuck isn't everyone else faving you" -Carl
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
sweet -kitty
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
I feel this so deeply.. you have such a perfect way of saying some of the most important things in so few words.. wonderful work. I hope more people come to read your work.
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On Sunday, January 23, 2005, Loneal
(86) wrote:
You nicely captured the loss ... well done and keep up the good work. ~L
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A former member wrote:
very beautiful and heartfilled... i loved it
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On Monday, November 29, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
beautiful. heartrending. concise and perfectly expressed piece - simply wonderful.
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